Despite her revulsion, her eyes were frozen on what was before her. JUSTIFIED #kindle #crime tinyurl.com/chzrsr9
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@Carolyn_Arnold Sounds like telling, not showing. Sorry! :)
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@Dirtysockcooker her revulsion is shown before that line (pars. above) where her coffee rises as bile in her throat.
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@Carolyn_Arnold ah, my bad. Thanks for replying.
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Replying to @Gnomosapien
@Dirtysockcooker :)

Jan 21, 2013 · 2:06 PM UTC